Showing posts with label writers' block. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writers' block. Show all posts

Friday, October 12, 2012

Story Seeds

At Moonlight and Magnolias, one of the agents I was pitching to asked me where I'd gotten the idea for the story. At the time I couldn't remember, and said it was probably a dream--if you haven't noticed, my dreams tend to be wild and fertile soil for stories.

But later I thought about it, and remembered. Last year I did a writing exercise. I created a character who deeply loved her family, gave her a magic she couldn't use, and ended on a vague disaster that made me so curious I had to know more, which meant I had to write more!

I had three seeds: a character, a hint of a disaster, and an irony.

Every novel was planted as a random seed and bloomed into a full-fledged manuscript, then trimmed and twined into publishable form. There are no limits to the germination of ideas, because everything--everything--can be planted, and if planted in the right soil, with the correct combination of other ideas, and watered with a diligent word count, it will grow.

Some stories are easier to grow than others. Sometimes stories wither and die before reaching the right shape. Sometimes they get neglected and go feral, taking over some forgotten corner of your mind until they strangle themselves into scraggly weeds no one would ever want to inflict on the neighbors.

And sometimes they bloom.

Seeds aren't always grandiose, or even remarkable. In high school my friends and I would choose a random idea and present each other with a full-fledged short story the next week. These ideas were things like a failed sneeze, or a lunch room, or a cold breeze, or a buzzing. And from them came a vast array of aliens, magics, spies, and quirky poems, each wildly different from the last, each unique and strangely compelling.

It wasn't the topic that made these stories. The topics were things to which we tied other things:
For me, a lunch room combined with aliens and just another day in the office to make a space drama. For another, a lunch room contained a spy and a lost contact to create a heist.

Just seeds. Little, ordinary, boring seeds buried together and watered with words until they sprouted into an idea.

If you're having trouble coming up with an idea for your next story, look around yourself and pick up a couple of seeds. Put them in a bowl together and see what sprouts. Start simple: something about a character (hair color, profession, clothing, accent), add an object (paperclip, jewelry, toy, shoe), and an event (lost it, killed something with it, it has a secret, someone else wants it.)

Chain them together: A blue-haired woman loses a paperclip.

Now ask yourself: Why is this paperclip important to her? (form a connection)

Then ask: What happens when she loses it? (figure out the consequence. Make it dramatic enough that you're hooked!)

Then ask: Why is it important that she's blue-haired? (Everything must be important! This step provides your plot twists, a glimpse of your setting, or some deeper characterization to get you started.)

Follow up: Add in a twist (intrigue) and then explain why that twist is important (make relevance)

Example: The paperclip was holding together her notes for a presentation that will make or break her career. (connection) It falls off in the elevator. When she steps off the elevator, someone runs into her, and the papers go flying. Because of this, she gets rattled and stumbles through the presentation, and gets fired. (Consequence/initial hook) But it turns out that the man she ran into is the company's most important client, and when he discovers that he caused her to lose her job, he sets out to fix things--but he doesn't want others to know he's a nice guy, so he's out to do it without anyone knowing. (intrigue!)

Now it's your turn. Why is it important that she has blue hair? Why can't the client let people know he's actually a good person?

Monday, April 25, 2011

Ugly Confessions

Okay, confession time:  I'm getting behind on writing.

Wait, what?  Ms. 3000-word-a-day is behind?  What's going on?

Yes, it's true: lately, the days I've been writing, I've been averaging no more than 1000 words... and most days don't get that!  Since I finished my first novel, I've been in a lag as I picked up two part-time jobs to pay the bills, edited the first, began looking for agents (still no success), and tried to start on my second.  The biggest problem is not time, because my jobs still leave me my mornings free.  The problem is endurance and plot - two things I'm lacking.

At first, I was so unsatisfied with the plot of my second novel that I couldn't bring myself to write. So I rewrote it.  And rewrote it again.  Then, by the time I was happy with my story, my writing muscles had gotten out of shape - I'm getting tired after 1000 words.  I've said before that writing is an endurance sport, and since I've stopped, my mind is getting flabby.

Solution?  Discipline.  No, I'm probably not going to get back to 3,000, at least not right away.  But I have to keep pushing myself, and no more excuses to put off what I should be doing first: writing!  I'll try for a week at 1-1.5k, and then push upward from there.  Wish me luck! 

What do you do, when you find yourself slacking?  How long does it take for you to get yourself back shape?